This the the paragraph submitted from Billy for his end of the year writing paragraph:
When we go hiking, we like to make trail mix before we go so we can eat it at the top. When we are walking most of the time it is rocky so we look at rocks that we could paint for our rock garden. We also like to look at all of the beautiful stuff at the end of the hike.
I love to go hiking with my family!
I give it an a+ grade!
ReplyDeleteI agree...A++
ReplyDeleteYou write very well -- I think I want to go hiking with your family! Please tell more about the rock garden sometime. And keep on writing. It's second only to talking when it comes to communicating with others.
ReplyDeleteMy expert teacher opinion is to agree with the first two comments! A+. Very interesting and detailed. Thanks for sharing!
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